The Late Bank Robber



            I wrote this piece for the Laguna Beach chapter of Dime Stories. Once a month we get together in a cozy wine filled room and share our work. One at a time we stand in front of the group and read our story out loud, the only catch is, the story has to be under three minutes long.
The Late Bank Robber
 By 
Jonathan Yanez

 She hated it. He didn’t know what it was or why but as long as he had known her, she had a phobia of grass. It wasn’t a fear “thing”, more of an inconvenience “thing”,
something she would avoid if she could. And if he recalled correctly, there was a huge, meadow right outside of town and directly in her path.
She was going to be late again, he should have known... The summer sun beat
down on his hat. Eyes squinted through perspiration as he glared at the thirty feet that
separated him from his enemies. Both hands grasped the horse satchels he carried. He
was powerless to make a move. Every muscle in his body screamed at him to drop his
precious payload and grab the twin Colt revolvers that rested on his hips, but he had to be
smart about this. She was always late.
            The entire town had deserted the streets, leaving the Sheriff and his deputies to
deal with the bank robber. Now multiple eyes cautiously peered through windows,
cracked doors and around corners to catch the drama taking place outside of the city
Bank and Trust. Five lawmen stood staggered in the town’s single dirt road. The
Sheriff and his four deputies trained their guns on the lawbreaker, begging him for a reason to fire.
            It was as though time stood still for Jonny “The Kid” Kent. Wearing a dark brown cowboy hat, gloves, boots and dirty blue pants, his mind raced for an answer. Minus the twin barrels at his hips, the few days of stubble that had grown on his face and his intense brown eyes, he looked every bit the part of a normal hard working ranch hand. He couldn’t help but grin at the situation he was in. He should have known she’d be late.
            “Drop the bags slowly and raise your hands in the air!” the gray-haired sheriff yelled.
            A smile crept over the bank robber’s face as a very faint, very familiar sound
met his ears; the sound of horse’s hooves.
            “You’re out-numbered and out-gunned! Give it up!” the Sheriff commanded.
            The Kid, grin still intact, answered back, “I think you’re going to need more men,
Sheriff.”
            Soon everyone heard the sound, a steady clip of hooves in the distance. The noise
made the lawmen adjust their attention to the lone rider approaching the group.
            This interruption was all The Kid needed. In the blink of an eye, he threw both
satchels he carried over his shoulders and grabbed the two death dealers that hung on his
hips.
            The rider who had been approaching could be seen now; a lone female. Katharine
“The Killer” Summers, on her trusty brown steed, Steamer. Dressed in all black with a long brown coat, her left hand was tight around Steamer’s reigns while her right hand commanded a Winchester. Her long brown hair trailed behind her and her finger tightened over the trigger.
            The only phrase that could explain what happened next would be “complete and
utter chaos”. Shots rang out, shattering the still air; lead flew through the sky like rain in
a monsoon. The Kid ran to his left still facing his adversaries, pumping bullet after
bullet in their direction. Lawmen fell left and right.
The sheriff and his men returned fire but were outmatched that day with The
Killer bearing down on their left and The Kid directly in front. The two were a deadly combination and it would have taken twice the lawmen’s number to have given them a fighting chance.
            Katharine still firing her gun, rode between the retreating law officials and up to
The Kid.
            “What took you so long?” The Kid asked gritting his teeth as she approached.
            “Just get on!” she responded back as she galloped up to him.
            Without either one of them breaking a stride the Kid jumped on the back of
Steamer and the two headed out of town, shots still ringing behind them. Wrapping his
left arm around her waist he turned in his seat aiming his right hand, that still held a revolver behind them, and fired his last two bullets.
            Turning back he leaned into her, lips inches from her ear, “What took you so
long… tell me it wasn’t the grass?”
            Her reply was simple and matter of fact as she turned her head to kiss him on the
cheek, “It was in my way about a mile out from the city. I had to go around it.”
     
Jonathan Yanez: The Late Bank Robber

Tuesday, December 11, 2012

The Late Bank Robber



            I wrote this piece for the Laguna Beach chapter of Dime Stories. Once a month we get together in a cozy wine filled room and share our work. One at a time we stand in front of the group and read our story out loud, the only catch is, the story has to be under three minutes long.
The Late Bank Robber
 By 
Jonathan Yanez

 She hated it. He didn’t know what it was or why but as long as he had known her, she had a phobia of grass. It wasn’t a fear “thing”, more of an inconvenience “thing”,
something she would avoid if she could. And if he recalled correctly, there was a huge, meadow right outside of town and directly in her path.
She was going to be late again, he should have known... The summer sun beat
down on his hat. Eyes squinted through perspiration as he glared at the thirty feet that
separated him from his enemies. Both hands grasped the horse satchels he carried. He
was powerless to make a move. Every muscle in his body screamed at him to drop his
precious payload and grab the twin Colt revolvers that rested on his hips, but he had to be
smart about this. She was always late.
            The entire town had deserted the streets, leaving the Sheriff and his deputies to
deal with the bank robber. Now multiple eyes cautiously peered through windows,
cracked doors and around corners to catch the drama taking place outside of the city
Bank and Trust. Five lawmen stood staggered in the town’s single dirt road. The
Sheriff and his four deputies trained their guns on the lawbreaker, begging him for a reason to fire.
            It was as though time stood still for Jonny “The Kid” Kent. Wearing a dark brown cowboy hat, gloves, boots and dirty blue pants, his mind raced for an answer. Minus the twin barrels at his hips, the few days of stubble that had grown on his face and his intense brown eyes, he looked every bit the part of a normal hard working ranch hand. He couldn’t help but grin at the situation he was in. He should have known she’d be late.
            “Drop the bags slowly and raise your hands in the air!” the gray-haired sheriff yelled.
            A smile crept over the bank robber’s face as a very faint, very familiar sound
met his ears; the sound of horse’s hooves.
            “You’re out-numbered and out-gunned! Give it up!” the Sheriff commanded.
            The Kid, grin still intact, answered back, “I think you’re going to need more men,
Sheriff.”
            Soon everyone heard the sound, a steady clip of hooves in the distance. The noise
made the lawmen adjust their attention to the lone rider approaching the group.
            This interruption was all The Kid needed. In the blink of an eye, he threw both
satchels he carried over his shoulders and grabbed the two death dealers that hung on his
hips.
            The rider who had been approaching could be seen now; a lone female. Katharine
“The Killer” Summers, on her trusty brown steed, Steamer. Dressed in all black with a long brown coat, her left hand was tight around Steamer’s reigns while her right hand commanded a Winchester. Her long brown hair trailed behind her and her finger tightened over the trigger.
            The only phrase that could explain what happened next would be “complete and
utter chaos”. Shots rang out, shattering the still air; lead flew through the sky like rain in
a monsoon. The Kid ran to his left still facing his adversaries, pumping bullet after
bullet in their direction. Lawmen fell left and right.
The sheriff and his men returned fire but were outmatched that day with The
Killer bearing down on their left and The Kid directly in front. The two were a deadly combination and it would have taken twice the lawmen’s number to have given them a fighting chance.
            Katharine still firing her gun, rode between the retreating law officials and up to
The Kid.
            “What took you so long?” The Kid asked gritting his teeth as she approached.
            “Just get on!” she responded back as she galloped up to him.
            Without either one of them breaking a stride the Kid jumped on the back of
Steamer and the two headed out of town, shots still ringing behind them. Wrapping his
left arm around her waist he turned in his seat aiming his right hand, that still held a revolver behind them, and fired his last two bullets.
            Turning back he leaned into her, lips inches from her ear, “What took you so
long… tell me it wasn’t the grass?”
            Her reply was simple and matter of fact as she turned her head to kiss him on the
cheek, “It was in my way about a mile out from the city. I had to go around it.”
     

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